We are a year 7 & 8 class at Pompallier Catholic School. My teacher is Whaea Danni.
Wednesday, April 22, 2020
My Daddy;s a soldier
This is my DLO of a poem called my Daddy's a soldier. We had to summarize what either the mum or the little girl was feeling. I chose the little girl. I wrote 8 things that she might be feeling.
If a member of your family went to war what would you be feeling?
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Great use of vocabulary Max, is there a way you could make your writing a bit bigger so that it is easier to read?
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